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My Peter Pan , Never Never Land (repost)
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My Peter Pan , Never Never Land (repost) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Moon shines bright, glittering stars blanket the night, You arrive in the moonlight,  Upon my open window, you stand, I gently step out to fly, I grasp your hand, Off we go to never never land, Through puffy clouds we fly, together you and I, floating through the magical, midnight sky,  With you i never grow old, young at heart, i feel so bold, youthful love, warm ,tender, my heart is never cold, I surrender, The journeys you take me to, magical places, full of wonder and surprise, I am lost in you, seeing loves glow deep in your blue eyes, Excitement, joy, laughter, forever inside your world, of happily ever afters, There is a kiss, one I have been saving, to plant upon your lips, not to miss, this...life changing moment, that time keeps on playing, I could remain here forever, inside loves never never land, my heart never growing old, loving you forever, My Peter Pan....  "Yes I will Come and fly away with you and leave my world behind" [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-27-2008 05:47 PM).] |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very sweet, tender poem my friend You wrote it well, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Peter Pan has always been one of my favorite stories, love what you have done here, ARH. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo A Romantic Heart, This is well thought out, and the pictures go well with the words. Be careful to capitalize your first person singular "I"s. Love Bobby |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi ARH, yes, I like the picture too, not to mention about the poem. Very sweet write. Prasad  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delightful and tender, dear ARH! Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful and romantic write ARH! ARCTIC WIND  |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Definitely Magic... ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
beautiful..... |
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