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Redundance |
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scorpio eyes shut Junior Member
since 2008-07-24
Posts 31kerala, india |
A drop Then one more And then another, and then…! The glistening leaves The damp, dull walls- nature’s icy whiplashes- The pattering fixture Echoes in my ears. Rain drenched earth A rain washed mind Fighting for air For survival Parasitical tentacles Of moss, lichen and fungus, Ubiquitous in their greed- Apathy? In the intense humidity In the eternity of seasons In the spring After the winter after the rain. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To me rain is revival ... enjoyed your beautiful poem greatly. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are very talented, Scorpio. I like what you write. Ida |
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