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One World View |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Floating over your world In an effervescent globule Viewing your lives with clarity I see rainbows everywhere. They are under my feet and over my head and occastionally a coloured band paints me blood red, chicken yellow or bruised blue. A spectrum of you. I marvel that the curvy lines in your dreamy place Never form a point Sharp enough to burst my bubble. In sheer brilliance you appear to me and vice versa And I hear you acutely. Your voices are rounded and musical. I wonder at the complexity of your sounds how you punctuate so explosively Filling my spherical shelter with a muffled concert of humanity. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Illuminating! Prismatic! Colorful! Did I mention that you speak English rather well? ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, I love this . . . my favourite line is the last, my second favourite - all the rest!  - Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms janet...impressively presented..enjoyed this |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow, Janet I love this! so mystical, reaching beyond the realm of reality. Ida |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
so whimsical! enjoyed the feel and read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Many many outstanding lines here. I love your poetic visuals. Love, Margherita |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Incredible depth and creativity! I marvel at this! Love your analogies and the way you put them across so gently. miscellanea |
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