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apes531
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since 2008-07-23
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0 posted 2008-07-26 02:24 AM


Someone who truly loves you is always there right?
No matter the situations..
They will try with all there might.
Always there even with other temptations.

Every slip up and every break through
Always loving you.. however
Just watch who you get close to
Cause in this world no one is there forever

You have to be willing to get hurt
Can you deal with the pressure
Of course every guys gonna flirt
What do you need a refresher?

Its what they do
Don’t feel to bad its happened to the best
They just don’t know how to be true.
And if you ever find one that really cares, you truly are blessed.

Hold on to them as long as you can
You might not find anyone as good
They are they definition of a true man
This needs to be understood


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XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2008-07-26 07:01 AM


Wow. This started a little rough for me, but when I got down to the end, both the message and the writing seemed to take on a new form, both of which I appreciate well.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-07-26 11:50 AM


WELCOME TO PIP!



ARCTIC WIND

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