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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-07-25 08:11 PM



Dining Simply

My taste finds its harbor within the sea
All of great favor each flavor given me
Every salty word exacerbates the sweet in brine
Quite a dish, worth looking forward to, be mine
Sampling from the plate at midpoint where we meet
To enjoy each tender morsel, savoring of every treat
To express my happiness, in every word let fall
Rushing to the shores in frolic, memories of bright recall
Watching you a dividend, the sated end of each good meal
In dainty dab, politely wiped, mouthwatering appeal
And over time, the best to dine, delightful company
Now given this, much more than bliss as given unto me
My heart is full, and all as well, to dine upon this wish
Of ambient sea this dinner be; not beast, nor foul nor fish

Copyright Kkh 7/25/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2008-07-25 08:54 PM


smiling here,

I agree, it's best to keep things simple.

A little fingerfood, and I'm good to go! (er...apparently? )

*wink*

But you do set a much more elegant table, lovie!


Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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2 posted 2008-07-25 09:26 PM


Yo ThisDiamond,

This sounds like a feast.  Perhaps "Simply Dining".

Bobby

XGarapanX
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3 posted 2008-07-25 09:30 PM


Yummy.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Ericc
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4 posted 2008-07-26 03:48 PM


Another lesson in
masterful
writing...thanks!

Eric

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5 posted 2008-07-27 09:33 AM


So vivid are your little treats that you give...always a joyful experience...Hi U...
WindWalker
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6 posted 2008-08-15 09:35 PM


This is a fine write!!!! and I must agee too, it is best to keep things simple.
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