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Premature Fall |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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**Hi all** After a long time away from Pips, I'm back. I've been writing the past couple months and look forward to sharing with you all again. Hope everyone is well! Things with me are GREAT! At any rate, glad to be back. Take care, AMY Warm air floating through the window Familiar tune on the stereo by the wall I sit here with pen in hand Trying to cope…trying to understand The tears are always there Usually they just don’t show Today I can’t hold them back I just let them simply flow As I continue to grow older I miss you even more I’m looking for a way to crawl out There is no open window…only a closed door The cycle has repeated itself I see it clearly in their eyes Though still here on this Earth I can hear the cries of their goodbyes When tragedy meets hopelessness Is a train-wreck bound to occur? I think of memories gone by They are now just a blur Furiously I try to find something to write Something to show that I care I look down at my paper Sighing…it’s completely bare Your blue eyes locked in my memory The day you saved us all So much has changed since that spring day Already starting to feel the cold air…and it’s not even fall |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing Amy, glad you are back~~ M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Amy, I really liked this! It's so good to have you back. And how awesome your muse is so active.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I'm new here, but welcome back anyway. Great write. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well hello there, Aimster~ how nice to find your words here today. Enjoyed your poem very much, and I hope life is treating you kindly. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Amy! You're baaaack! ~ and in fine poetic form, I see! I'm also pleased that things are going "GREAT" for you! Giving you a very warm, welcome-back, pip hug! Linda  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Amy, I am glad things are great with you. I loved your poem and its kaleidoscope of emotions. I am sorry that there are tears, but they are a great release, aren't they? The line that really held me in awe was the enigmatic "The day you saved us all". - Owl |
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apes531 Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 35 |
i like this poem keep writing  check out some of my poems im new here |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
ty all for your beautiful replies! i sure have missed this place. hope to post more! Amy The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return. |
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