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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2008-07-25 02:32 PM


THANK YOU
10 November 2007

Like that
single
soft
contralto
note
on dragonfly wings
as pure
as a raindrop on a leaf,
that you want to hold
in cupped-hand protection
in reverence
and remembrance
in the silence
beyond Forever . . .

so are my sacred minutes
with you –
welcomed
into your sacrosanct homes
your quivering lives
your throbbing, fractured, sensitive hearts
the meandering pathways of your vibrant minds
the weakness of your strengths
the strengths of your weaknesses
the moon shadows of your souls
the resonation of your God-spirits
your precious secrets
- some puppy-play happy
some graveside sad
some soul-shaking –
all of which
I will guard
with the honour
bestowed upon me
with the gift.

Pipsters
you are my sunburst joy
my rain-grey sorrows
my mountain-tops
my river valleys
my forest solace
my soul-sobbing cleansing
my gallery of the past
my starshine forward
my escape flight from reality  
to the celebration of reality
my new-eye panorama
my dance of freedom
my security guard
my butterfly-rhinoceros courage
my eagle-flight inspiration
my thunder drums
my lightning torch
my rainbow tears
the rising and setting of my glorious Brother Sun
my azure Paradise,

but most of all,
my flesh-and-blood friends.

- Owl

© Copyright 2008 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2008-07-25 04:08 PM




I'm grateful for your company as well, lovie.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-07-25 04:21 PM


We love and appreciate you too, lady Diana.
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2008-07-25 04:33 PM


Yo OwlSA,

Nice write.  I don't buy into your description of me.  I don'r quiver often.

Love Bobby

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2008-07-25 05:32 PM


beautifully written, sincerely expressed. this could NOT have been said better!!

This place is A M A Z I N G, and the people who make up it even more so!

The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
Eden Ahbez

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2008-07-25 06:13 PM


my rainbow tears

Dear Diana, you are a sparkling diamond in the Pip-poet-jewel-box!

And your poem is awesome.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2008-07-25 06:56 PM


wonderful tribute to some mighty fine folks!

I am especially fond of the lovely beginning of this special 'penning'!:

"Like that
single
soft
contralto
note
on dragonfly wings
as pure
as a raindrop on a leaf,
that you want to hold
in cupped-hand protection
in reverence
and remembrance
in the silence
beyond Forever..."

Now THAT is grand-fine 'poesy'!

serious and sustained applause!!

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2008-07-25 07:48 PM


quote:
but most of all,
my flesh-and-blood friends.


Yes!

And we might very well
subscribe this back to you
as true.





Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
8 posted 2008-07-25 09:17 PM


Oh Diana, Goddess of the Hunt and daughter of Jupiter, 'tis you who grace us with YOUR poetic presence.

Truly a fine piece of poet appreciation!

~ and most assuredly a

Love and Poets' Light,
Linda

XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
9 posted 2008-07-25 09:32 PM


A fine, fine tribute to this club of fine, fine people. And your contribution can hardly be seen as less valuable, Ms. Owl.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
10 posted 2008-07-25 09:41 PM



I echo all the other tributes Dianna

You wrote it well, Take care.

Lindsay

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
11 posted 2008-07-26 12:15 PM


Lovely content and such a sweet sentiment.

Gorgeous poem, each and every word of it!!!

Thanks for this~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
12 posted 2008-07-26 01:58 AM


Thank you to all my wonderful Pip friends, both old and new, for your poetry, your comments to mine, (both here and to other poems) and your comments to other poets, but most of all for your wonderful selves.  Your friendship is appreciated, needed and celebrated far more, and far more often, than you know.

Thanks, Karen for the warm and fuzzy feeling that gives me.  

Thanks, Kacy.  It is sooo good to be loved and appreciated.

Thanks, Bobby.  Giggles!  You may not quiver often, but Bones did when he was cold and frightened.

Thanks, Aimster, and you, too, are one of those amazing people.

Thanks, Margherita for your kind words.  You, too, are a gem.

Thanks, Bruce, and you are one of those mighty fine folks.

Thanks, Sunshine, for the great and loving  honour and for picking out the essence and birthplace of the poem.

Thanks, Linda, for your beautiful tribute to me, and for the light you always bring to us all.

Thanks, Brett, for your sweet comment, and you, too, are one of these fine, fine people.

Thanks, Lindsay, for your beautiful echo sounding through these blue halls.

Thanks, Lori.  I am glad you enjoyed it so much.

- Owl

Gaelynsgirl
Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175
Ont. Canada
13 posted 2008-07-26 01:53 PM


I've not been here long enough to be a deserving part of this but I wanted to say that this is so characteristic of the generous nature I have come to appreciate which is so much a part of you, and that I've taken so much pleasure from.

Kin, I am your friend.

Lynda

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
14 posted 2008-07-26 02:39 PM


Oh, yes, Kin, you have been here more than long enough to be part of this.  In fact you were one of the main reasons for my re-posting this.  

- Owl

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
15 posted 2008-07-27 01:58 AM


"Pipland" is truly a great place to be, Diana,
because of people like you.
                                  Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
16 posted 2008-07-27 02:08 AM


AND because of people like you, dear Ida!  Thank you for your heart-warming response.

- Owl

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