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"Serenity in Sleep"
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"Serenity in Sleep" |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan 
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Lay your armor down relax your tired bones and sleep in peace tonight |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And I slept till nearly noon!  You have strong powers, oh blue shadow!   thank you I needed that!  |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Swami Jill says, "Your welcome," and would like to add that she is jealous, for Swami Jill only slept 'till 8.  S.J. The Great |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Ok... zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Nice one Garapan. I guess the Swami's powers of pursausion are utterly undeniable. Don't worry, I'll wake you up later. *rubs hands together diabolically*  JNS |
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Bob K Member Elite
since 2007-11-03
Posts 4208 |
Dear Jill, No comment from me about the subject; I simply admired the simplicity and the preciseness of this short kind piece. It can be very difficult to make or find a piece like this one. Evidently, you weathered something useful and were able to make use of it beautifully without fussing or grandstanding. Thank you so much. Bob Kaven |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
*Swiftly opens an eye with marked alarm laced within, and peers around pensively... frantically, even...* I heard that... ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
*takes off horns and places halo on head, scrupulously readjusting it* You heard what Garapan? *quirks eyebrowl* All joking aside. Bob K, Thanks. I'm sorry to say that I tried forcing this poem and myself to be something its/i'm not. Fortunately I came to my senses on both fronts and had an eye opening epiphany. Life is too short not to be comfortable in your own skin. Life is too short to be theorectical and not actual. SO now, I'm turning a new leaf in my life. I'd say I'm sorry for deviating from my thanks into my musing,but than i'd be lying. Thanks. ~JNS |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Serenity is Right! ARCTIC WIND |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Of course, she's always right. Thanks.  |
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