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Open Poetry #43

Squinting

Khe Iem
Junior Member

since 2007-10-14

Posts 25

0 posted 2008-07-25 10:55 AM

SQUINTING

By Khe Iem

swiveling one’s head
rolling one’s feet

accidentally confronting but
keeping silent while
passing through
A town of half-breeds (angered)

      punching the air, lost to the world
                                  vast

buttocks, thighs and breasts.  Wandering crazily,
confined.  The pounding of loosened throats.  East and West.  Faces grimacing,

squinting

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-07-25 11:03 AM

Yo Khe Iem,

This makes no sense to me.

Whats-a-matter lamb-chop, you got a problem with us half-breeds?

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (07-25-2008 11:35 AM).]

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2008-07-25 01:28 PM

Hmm... I almost think I understand this. It helps that I am a half-breed myself.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

3 posted 2008-07-25 01:31 PM

While I can't completely comprehend your poem Khe Lem, Your style and syntax was brilliant.

JNS

Khe Iem
Junior Member

since 2007-10-14

Posts 25

4 posted 2008-07-27 10:56 AM

Sorry for bothering you. KI

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