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Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03
Posts 112
England

0 posted 2008-07-25 09:31 AM



Lets bring it to the boil
With tenderised words
and succulent touch
Lets roast our encounter
With ravenous thoughts
and edible trust.
Besotted bubbling sweetens us
Casseroled cravings steam
We feast on fermented moments
And spread voracious dreams.
Lets make a personal stew
With fresh faced desire
Liquefied inhibitions
and finely chopped taboo.

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Indigo
Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

1 posted 2008-07-25 09:57 AM


And for dessert...? :-)  You've created a poetic feast of pleasurable delights.  Enjoyed!

Indigo

XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2008-07-25 01:29 PM


Mmm... Yummy. Yes, let's!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2008-07-25 06:31 PM


sure works for me...I appreciate your pen's eyes
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2008-07-26 04:03 AM


You make my really hungry!  And that from one who is on 2 to 4 slices of bread most days, until my new job (with an unbearable boss) pays the bills up to date!  

- Owl

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-07-26 11:45 AM


YUM-O-



ARCTIC WIND

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