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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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0 posted 2008-07-25 12:24 PM


*I've translated this poem from Russian. The original is by Anna Akhmatova, written in 1917. I've published a collection of her poetry that I've translated into English and it can be found here, for those who are interested: http://www.amazon.com/Final-Meeting-Selected-Poetr  y-Akhmatova/dp/1438234732/ref=sr_1_5?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1215803357&sr=1-5

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We never quite learned to part, -
We wander slowly, side by side.
Outside, it's starting to get dark,
I'm silent, - you're preoccupied.

We'll enter a church and perceive
Baptisms, marriages, mass.
A minute later, we'll leave...
Why is everything different with us?

Or we'll sit on the trampled snow
In a dark cemetery, and sigh,
With a stick in your hand, you'll draw
A palace for just you and I.



http://home.comcast.net/~kneller/aboutme.html

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-25 03:48 AM


I love your translation work, dear Andrey, this is awesome. I am sure she smiles from above!

Love,
Margherita

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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2 posted 2008-07-25 08:12 AM


Such excellent taste in poetry. And such a masterful translation.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Master
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Boston, MA
3 posted 2008-07-25 11:53 AM


Thank you both dearly! I'm glad you enjoy my work!

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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2008-07-26 03:53 AM


This is magical - I can never (in all my re-reads) quite work out whether both parties are together, or one is only there in spirit and if so why - and I love the mystery of that.

- Owl  

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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5 posted 2008-07-26 11:43 AM


Looks like you proved your name in what you do!



ARCTIC WIND

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