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vandana
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0 posted 2008-07-24 06:20 PM





Each Morning

Each morning
I wake up in a dream
I make up for a day
Some ways
are just like a beating heart
Each morning
I pray
Each morning I lay down
When dawn woke up me
In an open eye
I wink and look up this morning
This morning brings me love
Love like a song book
A song that was in my heart
Each morning brings me a dream
A dream
Each morning
I wake up in th thunder lighting
Seeing rain tonight
Pray the rain would go fast
Bring the morning again
Ring my heart away
Each morning

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1 posted 2008-07-24 06:33 PM


"When dawn woke up me
In an open eye"

::smiles::   wonderful

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2 posted 2008-07-24 07:09 PM


Lovely, romantic, and strangely it makes some kind of weird sense to me at this moment. Not sure where that's coming from, lol!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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3 posted 2008-07-26 11:55 PM


Very lovely writing, vandana.

A

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-07-27 06:51 AM


You are so right, dear Vandana, dawn always brings new hope and new beginnings, new dreams ...

Lovely!

Love,
Margherita

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