Adagio - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Spuddette
Member

since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

0 posted 2008-07-24 04:39 PM

You seek and secure all secret ways
to pour into my heart
Resonant
In fleshy valves
Spiral
To fantastic realms
I follow on your endless search
though trembled thoughts
Absorb my mind
Each rise and fall
I dare to breath your climbs.
You whirl the broken pieces of my soul
In perfect pitch
they lift and fly
In freedom to your goal
Where sadness sings in joyous rings
and soars on chords and cries and curls.
Through Barbers Adagio for Strings
Waves of tears of bliss roll over
waves of tears of pain
Resound
In oceans deep of awe.
There swells the blood of angels
who whispered heavens name
Who floats on every score
Ascends on every frame.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2008-07-24 05:14 PM

Another incredible work.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2008-07-25 01:34 PM

Still incredible second time around.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2008-07-26 03:58 AM

Ohhh, . . . . listening with my inner ear to the sad, slow, soft music of this!

Hugs

- Owl

Spuddette
Member

since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

4 posted 2008-07-26 08:20 AM

Your comments are so interesting. I thought this was a little mournful myself. I showed it to a friend of mine a while ago who likes to tinkle about writing songs and after a bit of re-jigging he turned it into a lovely little song. What was fascinated me was how perky and upbeat his song turned out to be. It never ceases to amaze me how differently people can read (into) the same poem. Thanks all. xxxjanetxxx

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-07-26 11:44 AM

Interesting Write!

ARCTIC WIND

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

6 posted 2008-07-26 12:10 PM

Yup. I was right. Incredible.

quote:
Waves of tears of bliss roll over
waves of tears of pain
Resound
In oceans deep of awe.
There swells the blood of angels
who whispered heavens name

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

7 posted 2008-07-26 03:00 PM

I can feel the heartbeat of the poet in this wonderful verse. May you bless the composers who bless you and may the cycle be endless.

I love this...

with smiles
Lynda

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2008-07-26 06:41 PM

I have yet to welcome you properly to the forum, and since I've read this a few times, with such pleasure, I just thought I'd let you know that I'm enjoying your posts tremendously.

Your work is captivating.

Welcome!

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

9 posted 2008-07-26 07:20 PM

As a musician I can appreciate your imagery. It resonated in me a sense of contentment, albeit crescendoing and descrescendoing contentment. Your style and word choice is very appealing. Good job.

Jill

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2008-07-27 07:00 AM

I truly and deeply enjoyed this fine poetic tune.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2008-07-27 07:20 PM

there is something about your poems that I find very appealing for the way they stir the imagination.
Ida

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.