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Those Tears On My Pillow
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Those Tears On My Pillow |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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 Those Tears On My Pillow Pretending that I feel fine A smile covers despair Sadness is easily hidden No one would be aware I go off into a quiet place When I am feeling low There I shall cry for hours No one would ever know Its easy masking sorrow If I keep it out of sight Weeping tears in silence As I hug my pillow tight Only my pillow will know Tears I cried over you Heartache is never heard When hidden from view Those tears on my pillow Shall be shed silently Yearning goes unnoticed Its hurt you cannot see Hope©2008 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sad Write HopeS! Thats a new turn for you in your writing! And I like it  ARCTIC WIND |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Quite a poignant and sad write. You expressed the feeling so masterfully HopeS. I understand the sentiments. J.N.S. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic writing...James |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
There ought to be a way to preserve every tear, like a crystal memory. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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