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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-07-24 05:05 AM


Navigating Curves

She wasn't familar with West Covina
still the woman she was with insisted
that they take a late night drive
down the hill from her mansion,
to have some intimate conversation
on the way and while sharing dinner.
The subject of discussion was a man;
seems like one of the women had
discarded him and his new lover was
eager to discover why she had
sent him upon his way.
It was a wonderful star filled night
and the driver of the Mercedes was
busy swerving left and right even
though she could sense her passenger
was getting uptight, as if sending
a message that she had just this one
chance to say her piece and then
kindly disappear into the night.
Early upon the following morning
the man in question received a call
from the woman he used to adore but
no longer cared for, insisting that
his new lover was possessive and
mean and was trying to scare her
out of her panties it seems;
now that would have been a sight.
On that particular night my lover
had drank a little too much wine
and was having a wonderful time
seeing how fast her Mercedes
could navigate the curves.

JamesLee
23July
2008




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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2008-07-24 06:22 AM


Cool twist. Lots of curves, too, lol!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18
Posts 175
Ont. Canada
2 posted 2008-07-24 01:15 PM


Darn.... I wanted this to go on... Imagination must do!
You are a great storyteller! And I love surprises.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-07-24 02:40 PM


Great Storyteller indeed!



ARCTIC WIND

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