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scorpio eyes shut
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since 2008-07-24
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0 posted 2008-07-24 01:23 AM



Life-An Enigma

Sometimes
Life walks with me,
We admire the world around us-
The glories of the seas, the lands and the skies,
The happiness on a child’s face,
The harmonious ringing of church bells,
The tenderness in your eyes.

Sometimes,
Life runs ahead of me,
Looking over its shoulder, ever so often,
My footsteps dragging, reluctant-
Is that the world?
Or surreal images floating in the periphery
Of my mind?
Your frown and my grudging feet.

Sometimes
Life does lag behind me,
Do I surge then-
Wings of illusion,
Or is it mere ennui
Dormant in the murky depths of placid waters?
You, a stranger among strangers.


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1 posted 2008-07-24 01:29 AM


Welcome to PIP, man!

Love your work, let's read some more!

XGarapanX
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2 posted 2008-07-24 06:26 AM


Beautiful write, great read.

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Gaia
3 posted 2008-07-24 08:25 AM


Welcome! Your poem is an enjoyable thought-provoking write. I look forward to reading more from you.
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4 posted 2008-07-24 10:27 AM


An enigma, indeed!

Welcome to Passions!

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5 posted 2008-07-24 02:32 PM


WELCOME TO PIP!

     

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6 posted 2008-07-24 05:09 PM


Welcome to this place. You have an interesting style. xxxjanetxxx
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