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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
It is pandora's box stashed away where dust bunnies climb on each other's backs in search of the garden promised to her so long ago that now sits imprisoned in the dark the soft wood worn by the scratching sorely in need of a carpenter's skill or at least a clever locksmith who understands there is no key when so many needs bite the dust by not asking for enough. Indigo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"a clever locksmith who understands there is no key when so many needs bite the dust by not asking for enough." These lines kind of punched me in the face, like 50 times... I loved them... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Mesmerizing ... felt like being a dust particle emprisoned in the dark which, upon the opening of a window, suddenly dances in sunlight. Enlightening conclusion, dear Indigo! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...would suspect a thief would steal it knowing it was worth much more than other items in her treasure chest. enjoyed you here |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
My eye! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are a fabulous writer, and it's so good to read your poetry here, indigo. This provokes lots of good thoughts. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this Write Indeed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Kaoru- What a fabulous review! Those were my favorite lines also... in fact I started with the last two lines and worked out the poem from there. Margherita- I loved your interpretation! Thanks for dancing in the sunlight. DS- Anything worth having is hard to put a price on... Enjoyed your eyes. XX- And your eye too, Garapan. :-) Blues- Thanks for your inspiring words and kind comments. I do so love to provoke good thoughts! Artic- So glad you dropped by for a quick peek! Indigo |
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