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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-10-04 02:21 AM


It's difficult

it is,

to write:

I know I need

to say thanks twice.

I could not,

can't

give up on you

so you both

did

what kids do--

Resolved: The Dissolution of

the feathers of the nest...



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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2008-10-04 03:09 AM


Yes, it's tough when they leave the feathered nest.  Again I hear the honest introspection - and the wisdom and interaction and mutual support of all of you.

- Owl

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-10-04 10:56 AM


Oh, the melancholy creeps into the heart even if all is good and normal ... I am writing from my daughter's room, where she does not live anymore and when I put my mind on it I can hardly stand it, even if I am grateful and happy for her.

Oh, god!
Intense, dear Karen! ... and extremely intense in my reaction to it!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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3 posted 2008-10-04 12:09 PM


am there, doing that...thanks for putting the emotions into words...well done
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-10-04 12:15 PM


I hearya, sister! You captured those sentiments succinctly ~ yet perfectly!

Giving you an extra hug of love this day,


With love and understanding,
Linda

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2008-10-04 02:30 PM


sigh

I need to find something to do, huh?



Thanks for reading.

I'm gonna go take my legs for a walk today.

<--yeah, right Karen! heh


Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2008-10-04 03:00 PM


It's always hard when that happens, Karen but I guess it's another part of life we have to learn to live with. Sigh. A comforting hug to you.
                        Ida

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2008-10-04 03:17 PM


serenity blaze,

At times it is difficult to write, but please do, as you write well. Wishing you well...

BC

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