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CMP
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since 2008-07-23
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England

0 posted 2008-07-23 06:48 PM



Five Senses of You

I only want to stop and stare, to see your face, to know you’re there
To know you’re real, firm to the touch, to see the man whom I’ve longed so much
To see your eyes, thoughtful and deep, those eyes that I see each time I sleep
To see your smile, that knowing grin, that melts my heart from deep within
To feel your fingers explore my face, gently caressing, quickening hearts pace
To feel your skin warm against mine, sending shivers down my spine
To hear you whisper your love so sweet, against my ear, your breath, its heat
To hear your voice call out my name, roll off your tongue, to your call I came
To taste your kiss, passionate and full, holding me close as deeper you pull
To taste your taste, that’s yours, unique, a taste divine as senses peak
To smell your body around me, near, giving me comfort, never to fear
To smell your love, pungent with desire, igniting a flame, enticing a fire
I want, when I meet you, to excite all my senses, fulfil my passions, my cravings, to have no pretences
I want you to complete me, make all dreams come true, all I want is simply......you



© Copyright 2008 Claire Prout - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-07-23 09:19 PM


If you find him let us know if he has a brother...just kidding.  Wonderful write!  And Welcome!!!!
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2008-07-23 10:06 PM


Definitely a lovely first post. Very emotive, very moving.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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