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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-07-23 03:06 PM



Lie to
me.
The faith of memory waivers in
your absence.
Tell me that you're near and
space falls to thought
alone.
Whisper to me distance and false
beliefs of separation.
Then whisper to me something
endless...until your breath
passing warm against
me -
Is the only truth I know.



© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2008-07-23 09:31 PM


This belongs up top.

(Karen bites her fingers, trying to resist the temptation of the double entendre...)



She lost.

XGarapanX
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2 posted 2008-07-23 09:46 PM


*bites karens fingers, too* Yes, it does.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

kaile
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3 posted 2008-07-24 11:14 AM


it reads profound until the surrender to love....i took that to mean how love shouldn't be a logical cost-benefit analysis
Honeybunch
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4 posted 2008-07-24 01:07 PM


Wow, Eric, you've done it again!  You tap into what should be and then write it.  Thank you.

Helen

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-07-25 03:44 AM


... and it becomes the truth of both
in one single yet eternal moment, never to be undone ...

Wonderful, dear Eric.


Margherita


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