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Open Poetry #43
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twisted poet
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since 2008-07-22
Posts 5
i forgot
0 posted 2008-07-22 11:05 PM

The lover who screams the name
Of the one he loves
Who he writes and draws for
Must feel the pain
And to say the name to live again
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-23 03:23 AM

Very intense!

A name has such power, indeed.

Love,
Margherita
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2008-07-23 12:15 PM

Enjoyed your words!  Maybe if I change my name someone will call it - you think?  

Helen
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2008-07-23 06:10 PM

"The lover who screams the name
Of the one he loves"

~ Let's hope that the name that is screamed out is the name of the person that he or she with! lol

Lots of punch and emotional clout in this poem!


EA
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
4 posted 2008-07-23 10:15 PM

Yes, punch. Just knocked me one in the eye.

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