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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-07-22 03:32 PM



As if I’m touching
You –
Yet we know…even as my fingers
Slide across your lips,
And your breath rises warm to
Meet me –
There is no point where I leave
Off and you begin.
There is only the constant
Moment of our
Receiving.



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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2008-07-22 04:08 PM


Oh YES! YES! YES!
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2008-07-22 06:50 PM


Eric, this is amazingly beautiful.
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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2008-07-22 11:25 PM


beautiful! one of your best, and wonderfully expressed....

~~**~~
what am I missing????

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2008-07-23 03:00 AM


The beauty of this awareness is indeed overwhelming, dear Eric!

... and you express it like nobody else.

I love you.
Margherita

Honeybunch
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5 posted 2008-07-23 12:02 PM


"There is only the constant
Moment of our
Receiving."

Extraordinary write, Eric!

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