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amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

0 posted 2008-07-22 02:40 AM

Wild word songs whisper
Moon orange dances into place
Curves of fingers...restless
Grace gentle, then cradle my face

A twist toward lips attraction
I feel breath of nestled time
Prairie essence lingers onward
Your hand spreads and clutches mine

Quivered heartstrings echo
Through valley's grassy evermore
Clouded star stream's seance
Mists the moment of implore

On this eve of our beginning
Crossing out our ancient stains
We linger ever hopeful
And start to taste the rain

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-07-22 02:52 AM

quote:
On this eve of our beginning
Crossing out our ancient stains
We linger ever hopeful
And start to taste the rain

Enjoyed this romantic write greatly.

Wonderfully written.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-07-22 06:08 AM

my favorite place for passion
is the wild side of the badlands
enjoyed this one ms

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

3 posted 2008-07-22 06:28 AM

This flows from beginning to end in a crafted piece of verse.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2008-07-22 04:14 PM

I love the last quatrain. Way to leave me tasting the poem.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

5 posted 2008-07-22 05:31 PM

A gentle, sensual, evocative poem.

Lovely...

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2008-07-22 09:48 PM

That is a great poem my friend

You wrote it well.

Lindsay

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

7 posted 2008-07-22 10:11 PM

Thanks so much for all your kind comments. I enjoy the works of each and every one of you

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2008-07-22 10:59 PM

This is so beautiful.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2008-07-24 02:25 AM

Wonderful...James

snoman
New Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 7

10 posted 2008-12-11 06:40 PM

there's nothing quite like the cradling of a face whether you be cradled or are the cradle-er. it sparked a vivid memory and image that surprised me in its strength, and that's why we do this, no? thank you.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2008-12-14 11:04 PM

amusemi - enjoyed reading this, much said in your words...

BC

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