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From amusemi...I would like to introduce my son

twisted poet
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since 2008-07-22

Posts 5
i forgot

0 posted 2008-07-22 01:17 AM

My son and I wrote and posted this poem when he was eight...it is his first poem from 6 years ago. Now he has it in his library, too. Enjoy your new home Brice...Mom

The Whale Poem

I am a whale
Who lives in the sea
I'm really big
But rare to see

I'm grey outside
Eat tons of fish
I don't like sharks
My tail goes swish

Dolphins are my friends
They're mammals, too
We swim all day
In the sea of blue

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-07-22 02:49 AM

Welcome, dear Brice! This is a truly delightful poem. I will look out for more, because I know from this first one that I will like everything coming from your pen.

Very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-07-22 04:28 AM

Hello and welcome to our pages blue!! This is a wonderful poem !! I can't wait to read more of you!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2008-07-22 08:53 AM

Dear Brice,

Welcome to Passions! How kind of your
mother to introduce you to the blue pages.

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

4 posted 2008-07-22 01:29 PM

Welcome to PiP!! I'll look forward to seeing more of your poetry

~Sheli~

It's psychosomatic. You need a lobotomy. I'll get a saw
~Calvin & Hobbes

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2008-07-22 10:38 PM

Welcome to PIP Brice

You have made a great start.

Lindsay

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2008-07-23 09:14 AM

Welcome Brice...show us some teenage fun and angst!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2008-07-23 06:01 PM

Hello, Brice! You are quite the delightfully "twisted poet"!

Welcome aboard the PiP Ship! I hope you enjoy sailing these blue pages!

PiP, PiP, Ahoy!, there matey!

Your poem is a deep sea treasure!

Earth Angel

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