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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2008-07-21 11:32 PM




Like a drunk philosopher
I'm out of cheap wine and friends

Tonight will be rough again
drowning in pain and envy

How far this road appears so
When there's a place I long for

I wonder if next time love
Will out-weigh the sacrifice

Even in such strong longing

With no way to reach out
Because my words lack meaning

I reject my fate as so
Best not to be THE victim

The vultures will be out again
to collect the carrion


-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-22 03:10 AM


Awesome, dear Juju!! It will eventually pass yes ... but how appropriate your words feel ...

This is refined poetry!

And ... never doubt the meaning of your words!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-07-22 04:11 AM


Juju... I wish you love and sunshine and smiles for your day... lovely gifting here... thanks for sharing with us ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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Texas, USA
3 posted 2008-07-22 04:12 PM


Oh! Excellent ending---Impressive.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-07-22 08:50 PM


I haven't seen your poetry in a long time
Juju!

It's been Missed!



ARCTIC WIND

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2008-07-22 11:01 PM


There's always strength in the vices, the weaknesses...
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
6 posted 2008-07-29 08:57 PM


Wow! Thanks for taking the time to read my poetry!!

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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