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Jangled Immortality
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Jangled Immortality |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Jangled Immortality The mold was broken then A range so much broader cracked the seams Once flexed, not again to fit the same of dreams Pink turned thick and plumb, fingers of gray Stroked the afternoon sky, flicking clouds as coins Emotions grow exponentially as time employs Innocent and wild blooms, mature and rich Revealed as new, take on a heightened pitch Braced against the valley rim Ne’er to return again from whence they came And ne’er could it be a feeling quite the same Such as a mountain once given birth Freed from the struggles and the binds of earth Now levitated in the soul as all majestic things The mold was broken then I cannot put it back again, ignore or just pretend That I don’t see, or paint with living art Soulfully Copyright Kkh 7/21/08 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Masterfully written, dear TD! Love, Margherita |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Your touch always a gem. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Such as a mountain once given birth Freed from the struggles and the binds of earth Now levitated in the soul as all majestic things The mold was broken then I cannot put it back again, ignore or just pretend That I don’t see, or paint with living art Soulfully" Lovely, TD! Helen |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Truly inspired writing. Excellent! Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is such a beautiful write, Kathleen. "Pink turned thick and plumb, fingers of gray Stroked the afternoon sky, flicking clouds as coins" Nice imagery!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed your Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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