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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-07-21 03:46 PM




And then at once I am
The wind,
Having swept aside
Illusion’s form –
And joined my spirit to the
Breeze.


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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-07-21 05:44 PM


And then at once I am
The wind,
Having swept aside
Illusion’s form –
And joined my spirit to the
Breeze.


... and they danced as one
in the shower of stardust
and blew away all residue
of any passing clouds
and they were at once
the matter and the space ...
and gazed into forever.


You do inspire, dear Eric!

Margherita

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2 posted 2008-07-21 06:26 PM


lovely picture in my mind~
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3 posted 2008-07-24 11:53 AM


This seems like the verge of enlightenment. Thanks for posting it.

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Honeybunch
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4 posted 2008-07-24 01:03 PM


Eric, may I say that it IS enlightenment?  You couldn't say it if you didn't know it!  Lovely!

Helen

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5 posted 2008-07-24 04:11 PM


Beautiful Zen-esque imagery, Eric!
You've left us with both 'breeze' and 'gale' with few words.

XGarapanX
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6 posted 2008-07-24 05:12 PM


Pardon the pun, but this blows me away.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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7 posted 2008-07-24 06:15 PM


enjoyed
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