Grave Sense.... One of my favorites...

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Open Poetry #43

Grave Sense.... One of my favorites...

PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07

Posts 87

0 posted 2008-07-21 02:03 PM

Send away for a priceless life.
Ship all your golds and riches.
Strip the piano of ivory.
For he won't bring upon a new tune.
Long lost within a harsh torrent.
Pupils fill,
As did his grave.
Surrounded by a pool of sorrow.
Upon this day of mourning.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
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1 posted 2008-07-21 05:49 PM

Strip the piano of ivory.
For he won't bring upon a new tune.

This really expresses the deep mourning powerfully.

Poignant.

Love,
Margherita

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2008-07-24 11:39 AM

does intrigue the reader to think of numerous possibilities. cool.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2008-07-24 02:05 PM

Long lost within a harsh torrent.

The saddest line of all.

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