navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Untitled
Open Poetry #43
Post A Reply Post New Topic Untitled Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2008-07-21 01:55 AM



Pain...
Sadness...
Unexplainable feelings...
What do I do?

Lost...
Helpless...
Unquestionable fear...
What happens now?

Hurt...
Confused...
Unfathomable loneliness...
Will I ever be free?

Of these feelings I have
These persistant emotions
Dwelling in my heart
Day after day?

Will it get easier?
To bear these feelings?
To know that
All is hopeless?

Questions...
Unaswerable...
Love...
Unrequited...

© Copyright 2008 Lavada Miller - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-21 11:58 AM


This is very sad, but you will move out of your sadness and also find a true love, now that you are aware of being stuck somehow and it depends on your determination to fully live your life.

The pain is felt.

Nice to see you back!

Love,
Margherita

Gaelynsgirl
Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175
Ont. Canada
2 posted 2008-07-21 12:11 PM


Self examination always requires courage. And you are obviously a woman of courage. May your answers when they do come, give you balance, an honest perspective and peace of mind.
well done....

Lynda

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Untitled

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary