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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2008-07-20 03:43 AM




  The Dreams of Another
      ~*Marge Tindal*~

   In the soft light
             there came a moment
        of full realize
             that the dreams of another
             are not always seen through my eyes~

  I can only envision that which I know
         bestowed ever graciously
                   through the thoughts that I grow~

   Not for an instant
         can I come to caress
              the dreams of another
                  in full-heart bless~

  But, I can pray for you
         summoning your wish-on-a-star
             to surround you in love
                for just who you are~

  So, that is my mission
       on this night in surrender
           as the twi-of-morn comes
               to you, soft and tender~

  These prayers I gift you
        in the hopes that they may
           awaken you to life's joy
              when light makes new day~



~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-07-20 04:01 AM


There is a sacredness emanating from your beautiful words, dear Marge, that makes me receive them in awed silence.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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2 posted 2008-07-20 04:16 AM


Agreeing with Margherita.

A very beautiful poem, Marge, from a very beautiful soul, who, in the midst of her own health problems, has enough heart to share it with everyone and especially anyone who needs it, and with understanding beyond understanding.  So very Marge.  I am sure that whoever you wrote this for will be very blessed by it, as well as all of us who read it.

- Owl

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3 posted 2008-07-20 06:26 AM


You're beauty shines through,Marge. My prayers are faithfully with you every day.
love, Barb

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4 posted 2008-07-20 06:47 AM


I am touched by this, and you


Betty
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5 posted 2008-07-20 10:00 AM


I do love this one also. You are soooo talented my friend.
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6 posted 2008-07-20 10:18 AM


This is the most beautiful purest truth in compassionate care.

God bless,
  
  Rae

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7 posted 2008-07-23 12:07 PM


Marge

Thank you for this beautiful poem.  Maybe we can't see the dreams of another, but we can bask in the beauty of others - that is what I do when I read your poetry.  

Beautiful woman, I am so happy that you are getting better.  You are a strong woman.

xoxoxo
Alison

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8 posted 2008-07-23 09:10 AM


such devoted support....enjoyed the read
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9 posted 2008-07-23 03:03 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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10 posted 2008-07-23 09:37 PM


Stunning...your poem and more importantly 'you' are so beautiful to the core.
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11 posted 2008-07-23 09:41 PM


a tender gift indeed...



and I remember praying for just such a love, and it seemed like yesterday.

*touching the screen* again

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12 posted 2008-07-24 12:40 PM



Marge that is soooo good.

A beautiful poem by a beautiful lady.

Love Lindsay

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13 posted 2008-07-30 11:17 PM


Dear Marge:

Such a tender and compassionate poem! Reflects your spirit!

Love you
Betty Lou

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14 posted 2008-07-31 12:28 PM


But, I can pray for you
         summoning your wish-on-a-star
             to surround you in love
                for just who you are~."

This is my fav line out of the whole poem Marge!-- I don't know why, It just shinned out more than the others!

I Enjoyed this write


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