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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-07-19 03:47 PM



Heart,
Broken…yet made for
This alone.


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1 posted 2008-07-19 05:03 PM


When we can feel the heart break, it means we are alive ... and strong enough to mend it with the next breath, if we decide so.

((((Eric))))

Margherita


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2 posted 2008-07-19 05:06 PM


Eric,

This hurts to read.

Alison

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3 posted 2008-07-19 05:08 PM


Hi Ericc, I share your poem and the comment of Margherita...

regards

yann

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4 posted 2008-07-19 05:12 PM


Heart,
Broken...making room for more

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5 posted 2008-07-20 04:13 AM


sending you hugs Ericc... I do so love reading your thoughts... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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6 posted 2008-07-20 04:42 AM


Wishing you healing sunshine on your shoulders.

- Owl

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Ericc
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8 posted 2008-07-20 03:41 PM


Thanks for the replies everyone.

There's a Zen saying - it's the space within a vase that allows flowers to be
placed there.

A teacher of mine once held a silver dollar in his hand and asked me to take it from his tightened fist. Of course I could not - and then he broke his fist open and asked me to try again. Then I understood. Now...at this stage of my life I am beginning to (really) Know what he was trying to show me. Without spaciousness - we have nothing to give and nothing to receive. Everything breaks - but clinging to broken pieces only brings suffering. It's impossible to grasp space - it only allows.

Love,
Eric

[This message has been edited by Ericc (07-20-2008 06:33 PM).]

Margherita
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9 posted 2008-07-20 06:31 PM


It's impossible to grasp space - it only allows.

Thank you, dear Eric, for this addition. It is illuminating, though it is not an easily  comprehensible concept.


Margherita



Ericc
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10 posted 2008-07-20 06:42 PM


On another note - it's impossible to be grasped by space. We can only let go and become more in our own personal lessening. Spiritual healer Joseph Goldsmith called our lifetime a "parenthese in eternity". And once the heart is broken from it's "need" (only what we think it needs)the parenthese opens to eternity during this very moment. Would any one of us (truly) trade an old love that left us semmingly "broken" for this moment earased? Maybe? But it's that very heartbreak that creates the spaceiousness that allows us to love again, more fully, deeper and with a hope that reaches past the parentheses onto eternity itself.
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