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The answer from Universe
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The answer from Universe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * * The answer from Universe * * * A tune of unfathomable longing drummed upon the steering wheel, eyes routinely focused on traffic, while the windows of my mind open wide to scrutinize my life. Whispers between heart and soul manifest a long-cherished thought, a secret desire uttered in unison. From its many friendly faces the night smiles knowingly at me. I see my wish shield hanging high up there among the stars. The moon too is waving hello. I know that Universe conspires, all available data is glanced through to realize my innermost desire. Darkness shows me through its empire, undaunted I relax in its quiet embrace, my dreams bring crystalline waters eager to caress my every component to celebrate rebirth and innocence, till I feel dawn dancing upon my face. An inner tremor expands from my core, a new awareness unfolds in splendour. In fervid anticipation I adorn my soul, so that you will perceive it in full bloom, when the moment comes to welcome you. You, who have listened to my prayer, You, who now share my every breath, You, who dance to the same divine tune, You, who know the hidden side of the moon You, whose energy revives my own You, who do not fear sporadic shadows You, who contemplate and glorify life in every way. You, who are the answer from Universe, know that I welcome you anew in gratitude and full consciousness, in every single moment of every new day. * * * |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem conveys so much... The freedom to simply be and embrace all the goodness that surrounds us makes me want to get up and dance. This is lovely, Margherita~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita, you write from a place that not many go to and that's why your words are always so beautiful and meaningful. Thank you! Love Helen |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Margherita, wonderful write… thank you for taking us through this answer from the universe. Enjoyed the journey. Prasad |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita, I was saving this poem to read last. I knew that it would be spiritually captivating and engaging and that I would be hard pressed to pull myself out of the reverie and be able to respond to the poetry of others. Your poetry always sweeps me away to other worlds and it takes me a while to return to terra ferma.  Another     |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Margherita, this is beautiful and a vibrant hommage to the universe and his creator... You, who have listened to my prayer, You, who now share my every breath, You, who dance to the same divine tune, You, who know the hidden side of the moon You, whose energy revives my own You, who do not fear sporadic shadows You, who contemplate and glorify life in every way. You, who are the answer from Universe, know that I welcome you anew in gratitude and full consciousness, in every single moment of every new day. this stanza is outstanding regards yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I echo Yann's words, Margherita. I lost myself in your skies, for a wonderful while. - Owl |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Amen. Love, Eric |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Margherita- In fervid anticipation I adorn my soul, so that you will perceive it in full bloom, when the moment comes to welcome you. How joyous and sensual a greeting to receive.. open heart, open arms, in complete connection with the Universe. *sigh* Lovely. Indigo |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Margherita, This is an interesting poem, with its "wish shield". Love bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Margherita... a wonderful, wonderful gifting you gift us..... love RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, for being patient enough to read this long write and for your loving comments that touched my heart. Love and have a wonderful Sunday! Margherita  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Only someone with a beautiful soul and a deep understanding could write this, Margharita. I am keeping this one. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Just Beautiful! I love the word choice and Descriptions you chose to use! I love anything to do with Stars... ARCTIC WIND |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A wonderful post Margherita my dear It touches the heart strings. love Lindsay |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like your use of language in this one, and the images to conjure up. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita! I am coming in for another read! LOVELY! ARCTIC WIND |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
(quote)I see my wish shield hanging high up there among the stars.(/quote) I wish I had written this... Send me your muse's sister, please! Mine has gone to other realms! And thank you...for everything! |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Simply wonderful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are all so kind and warm my heart with your loving comments! Thank you! Love, Margherita |
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snoman New Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 7 |
Margherita, I am new to this site, but I enjoyed your thoughts very much. |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
You, who have listened to my prayer, You, who now share my every breath, You, who dance to the same divine tune, You, who know the hidden side of the moon You, whose energy revives my own You, who do not fear sporadic shadows You, who contemplate and glorify life in every way. You, who are the answer from Universe, know that I welcome you anew in gratitude and full consciousness, in every single moment of every new day. ********************* the creativity is you .. the beauty is you too. thank you margherita for your nice pom My respect nourzihane |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Margherita, you were in a different world here my friend, I loved it all, thank you for sharing. Rick |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear snoman, for your loving comment and welcome to Pip! I will be looking forward to your entries. Thank you, dear Nourzihane! You always touch me with your sweet replies. Thank you, dear Rick, my dear gentleman for your loving comment. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I agree with Sunshine about the wish shield... what a wonderful image! *S* I'm glad I didn't miss this! *S* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Dear Margherita you can turn the most hardhearted into a believer |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Margherita, I know you are always there to read my poems and I thank you for your allways kind and heartfelt replies. I am so glad to read you and enjoy the thoughts you provoke. What a deep and inspirational write. Absolutely lovely. As you can see, we all love to read you and admire your skills and sweet spirit. Thank you again. Love WT. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"You, who are the answer from Universe, know that I welcome you anew in gratitude and full consciousness, in every single moment of every new day." ...lovely ending to a very lovely poem...enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
An absolute pleasure to read...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Suthern, Michele, Tracey, Steaven and James, for your loving and kind replies. Enjoy a love filled, sunny Sunday, and let Universe collaborate in the realization of your dreams! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Margherita, you can sure write. This is fantastic. Just beautiful. Thank you for sharing your universe with me. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'Universalistic' photographic and poetic imagery! applause!! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Sue and dear Bruce, for your loving comments! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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