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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Adrift A small empty boat adrift on the silver-ripple moonlight… quintescent luminescence and enlightenment! --- b. e. adams (7/18/08) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm going to drift into dreamland now, on that tiny boat. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I think you're title says it all, but I gotta love the silver ripple effect. Pretty poem~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ Ah, you did a 'remember number' on me with this one~ Much, much applause~  Let's see if I can find that little drift of boat ... the one that I once wrote~ If I can ... I think that I will *re-gift* it in your name~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Magical, indeed! Now I see where dear Marge felt inspired to re-gift you with her moon-boat scenery. Both, your poem and hers, are delightful. Love, Margherita  |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Even 'Adrift', a leaf is bound by the currents of its own river. This idyllic setting could be a metaphor for our lives. The silver moonlight is like a promise, an earnest of what the day will bring when the sun rises- a reflection of what will be. It carried me with it. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Soothing imagery |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Nice feeling! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Is there room enough on that boat for me?!? A little gem, you have penned! Love & En-Light-enment, Linda |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love your poem, Bruce - that enlightenment - although somewhat ambiguous, I choose to accept as not the cynical enlightenment of something sad, but the awakening to the light of something beautiful and good. - Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a special 'thank you'!...to all the grand-fine "P.I.P.-land" authors who commented on this 'lil piece of "Zen"! ---b./shdp |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, I close my eyes and I see - and I feel the gentle rocking of a little moon boat. Thank you. Alison |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This is an enchanting bit of writing! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Nice imagery! ARCTIC WIND |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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