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Open Poetry #43

The Talk of Tantalize

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-07-18 09:28 AM

The Talk Of Tantalize

Turbulence waters pouting lips
Rousing unquenchable thirst
In the making of waves
My emotions
Yielding,
My will awash upon the night
Exposed in the retreat of tide
A feeling,
Taking back what is given
Painting please by finger tips
Finding the keys to a musical score
Its own melodic flow, for more
Your eyes
Provocative,
Seeming surf in gloss
Some secret place along this beach
Silver touches given speech
The talk of tantalize
Dance abandon with
My sighs
Rise up and crest
Repeal to rest
A tide of two made one
Before me now
Rolls on by moon
Set sated sun

Copyright Kkh 7/18/08

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2008-07-18 06:18 PM

Oh my. Beautiful, if a tad tongue twisty.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-07-19 08:25 AM

quote:
The talk of tantalize
Dance abandon with
My sighs

Such words are music to the ears of the reader. Wonderful write.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2008-07-19 10:57 AM

A tide of two made one
Before me now
Rolls on by moon
Set sated sun

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A very beautiful slip of a poem.
Your words grace the page in a lovely way, TD~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2008-07-21 07:30 AM

your words have a natural ebb and flow of feel, never forced

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2008-07-21 03:45 PM

Oh wow...!!!

Eric

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-07-21 09:40 PM

Speechless.....

ARCTIC WIND

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2008-09-05 04:06 PM

Beautifully composed and your wording supreme. I read this twice to double the enjoyment of it and I must say ... impressive from beginning to end.

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