Issues In Communication 2 (expanded version)

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Open Poetry #43

Issues In Communication 2 (expanded version)

Musel
Junior Member

since 2008-07-17

Posts 34

0 posted 2008-07-18 06:40 AM

Issues in Communication 2 (expanded version)
Tonight I had an inclination,
To put like words in combination,
To put them all now in relation,
This little thing of my creation.

So I've succumbed to fascination,
My pen proceeds to battle station,
My mind should act with inspiration,
To this semantic application.

On page it now has preservation,
Inside it gains appreciation,
When fears receive exoneration,
When thoughts in words provide elation.

This may put you into sedation,
You may not feel the same sensation,
Yet this is my infatuation,
And so it needs no adoration.

These words have no real implication,
And thus they hold no expectation,
For beauty lies in presentation,
A rhyme the same for its duration.

It merely is an exclamation,
To ease poetic trepidation,
And lead ye not into temptation,
To find a phoney imitation.

I write to relay information,
Without any consideration,
To a critic's choice of condemnation,
Of a poem that's built on no foundation.

Some say, "This is abomination",
This work needs expert reparation.
But give it not your restoration.
For rhyme is poets’ respiration.

Small verses with no elongation,
Can lead to quiet desperation,
But fear ye not the limitation,
Of this my wordy incantation.

Enjoy this drawn out explanation,
And give it your appreciation,
Treat it not with indignation,
Instead make it a celebration.

So now I'm near the culmination,
A stream of thought; imagination,
Varied like the constellations,
United whilst in segregation.

And so ends this investigation,
While not without exasperation,
Has helped me in my navigation,
This little thing of my creation.

Musel
Junior Member

since 2008-07-17

Posts 34

1 posted 2008-07-18 06:43 AM

this includes the stanza's never included, for fear of making it too drawn out and utimately taking away from its originality... what do you think?? for comparison please see original issues in communication... any feedback welcome

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2008-07-18 06:46 AM

Cleverer than the other one.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

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