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god is the greatest
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god is the greatest |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria 
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Greetings everybody in here I Got somthing cool and I want to share it When things are down, and you are out of your mind, just remember,god is the All-Kind When your life is in darkness, and nothing is right, just remember, through the darkness, god is the Light When nothing makes sense, and your heading for demise, just remember, it doesn't make sense but, god is the All-Wise When times are troubled, and no one seems to care, just remember, god won't hurt you, He is Just When your heart is breaking, and your pain makes you fall, just remember, god sees all When you are weak, and the road seems long, just remember; seek strength from the All-Strong When life is a burden, and everything is unstable, just remember, god is Able When the way is cloudy, and there is no one by your side, just remember, god is the Only Guide When no one wants to listen, or is willing to lend an ear, just remember,god is the All-Hearing When you are poor and penniless, and you are stuck in a niche, just remember, god is the Rich When you are down in your misery, and there is no where to run, just remember, you can always run to the One When youý are all alone, and your pain has no end, just remember god is the only one you can on depend And when your scars are hurting, and your heart is in fear, just remember, god is with those who are patient God Bless us all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for sharing! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Nourzihane. It feels as though you, or God, or both of you, knew just how much I needed this right now . . . - Owl |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
LOVE this. English may not be your 1st language but you wield words like a swordsmith, better than most and with a heart that few dare to try. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Nourzihane, The idea is in your poem. Try and remember, that in the common English language, "God" is always capitalized, if you are talking about your God. Love Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nourzihane, you have penned a gloriously divine poem! It is one of grace, beauty, and wisdom and one that I am saving to a special folder.  It was a pleasant surprise to see your beautiful smiling face this morning! ~ Well, it's morning here where I live! lol  Yes, "God bless us all", Linda  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure...James |
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