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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA 
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The glow of the moon, the silhouette of a pine, you and me wrapped together in silver night shine. The stare of your eyes – what do they see? The feel of dark iris’s lay upon me. Could the light of the moon help guide us so new? Rays blanket one figure that’s melded from two. Comfortable silence, hearing only your heart; a daydream unfolding, we each have our part. This sense of ease; unexpected so soon, I smile at the thought of sharing more moons. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Then the audience sighs and fall into a swoon.  ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
lol... like your post Brett! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like you might be sharing the moon with an Aquarius....? Ida |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
NO - believe it or not, the most romantic capricorn I have ever met... he writes poetry, has already written me one, talks for hours, I haven't asked him his ascending and moon sign yet - but I will! Interesting stuff! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am very happy for you, Debby. You deserve some sunshine in your life (that, is besides Sunshine, your aunt)! Lovely poem, too.- Owl |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Graeshine2006, There you go. Sharing moons is always a good idea. Love Bobby |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I smile at the thought of sharing more moons. When love speaks, hearts listen. Holding you close. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Debra, your romantic, silvery words glow like the moon! May you have many moonlit nights with your shining new knight!  Loving hug and a warm smile, Linda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is a lovely romantic poem Deb, I really loved it, keep up the good work. Love Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely delightful, dear Debra! One to cause a sigh ... Love, Margherita |
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