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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
The current of your river is constant and swift until it curves lazily past willow tree touches on beaches where stones have been reduced to mineral grains glinting in the sunlight and god is a dragonfly's wing frozen in flight until I exhale below dark waters and breathe you in once more. Indigo |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Perfect. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very soulful and primitive i like  |
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scoff Member
since 2008-07-04
Posts 71Georgia |
Idyllic, passionate and beautiful. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There is just something about a river... this was deftly sweet but astute. Like you've been river fishing all your life, and knowing its ways... Lovely! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Double X- How can a one word comment be so sweet? Many thanks. I.G.- Glad you like. High praise from a nature gal such as yourself. :-) Scoff- Nice to see you here. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts and feelings. Serenity- Nature's perfect design offers both fisherman and lover the vehicle to express their spiritual connection to this earth. Thank you for your kind words. Indigo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A pleasurable read, especially enjoyed this: "and god is a dragonfly's wing frozen in flight" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The current of your river is constant and swift That's just so nice, the way it should be!!! Love this little rush of a poem, Indigo~ |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Midnite- There are so many places in nature to catch a moment of grace and meditation, aren't there. Am smiling that you caught one of mine. Blues- Happy to take you traveling like a leaf on my river of a poem. :-) Indigo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Awesome, I really enjoy your "amphibious dreams". You are definitely among my favorite poets. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Indi does her river like whispering silk across broken glances. Covering the jagged and undoing the perfect currents. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lovely imagery |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
A wonderful metaphor for what the depth of a relationship can be or become. Loved the contrast between the heights referencing the dragonfly and the depths of narrator as amphibian. Isn't it amazing what love can grow into - what a tadpole can become...as a mature extension of being. |
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