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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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another momentary galloping down your whispering gaze the young arrows of warriors do you recognize them as danger or as toys that prick your skin and you enjoy the healing itch when you play in your gata skin and wiggle the handle hair flirty but keep innocent in your eyes just in case I eventually get there when there are so many other places you know I would spend my time or is this something we should ignore as a topic of discussion for now in case just the thinking makes it hard to enjoy the journey of pretended ignoring ________________ daark |
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aZMERE bOHEMIAN nOMAD Junior Member
since 2008-07-07
Posts 20I live in the uk but dreaming of a place across the channel |
Sometimes its better to enjoy the moment, so much can be mutally conveyed without the need of words . Enjoyed this indeed  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Azm' thanks my friend, I agree with wordless being a blessing sometimes. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
on life's road we pause grateful, slaking our soul's thirst at the well of friends. Indigo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Well, these words can be applied to many a situation, I believe, dear D.! Too much thinking can really get in the way of blissful moments. Very insightful, I would say! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms indi, always does the stone wait by the river even if for a perhaps flood to know her currents. Thanks babe _____________ Ms mar, when the gata runs she seems to forget her gates and windows....thanks ms mar |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a&w, thanks my friend |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
but keep innocent in your eyes just in case I eventually get there ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ mosey on over and take your time eventually will be just fine. sorry D, just had to throw a little rhyme onto this one. Hugs you. D~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
when there are so many other places you know I would spend my time or is this something we should ignore as a topic of discussion for now in case just the thinking makes it hard ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Goodness sakes, you're confusing when you want to be. Or maybe it's just me. Ya think!! You know I love your little snippets and innuendos. Hugs Mr. Mosey man~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks babe for the touch and rhyme... _______________ ms bluezy...something about eyes and getting stuck there .....I can't confuse you. thanks babe |
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nebulous_nymph Junior Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 37Inertia |
purrrrrrrring for more of you..... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...........nice! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Musel Junior Member
since 2008-07-17
Posts 34 |
to enjoy the journey of pretended ignoring great last line I really enjoyed this poem.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms nymph I do miss your kitten clawing at my tattoos, thanks babe ____________ Ms r/b you make me smile lady love, thank you ___________ Friend musal thanks so much [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-19-2008 08:35 AM).] |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
A sensual journey of sauciness. A great read - one I totally identified with! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Gaelynsgirl, most humble thanks and welcome to the pipzoo. I look forward to your penspeak here. |
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