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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-07-16 03:11 PM



Quietly…you
Come to me.
A breath dreamed across
My body.
And the morning holds still in the
Faint grip of night –
Waiting…one more breath to
Dawn.





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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-07-16 03:34 PM


A magical moment, dear Eric! And your interpretation is nothing less than perfect.


Margherita

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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2 posted 2008-07-16 04:16 PM


Woah, again. Dang.

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ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2008-07-16 07:16 PM


Double Woah!!
You are certainly in a wonderful flow Eric.
Amazing write.

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2008-07-18 01:22 PM


I missed this one iitially and it certainly would have been my loss if I'd missed it completely. Loved it!

Helen

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5 posted 2008-07-18 02:43 PM


Beautiful.
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