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kaile
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0 posted 2008-07-16 11:55 AM


my "depressed" student argued
how her candle of energy was
fast depleting

she could push on
and cover the miles, she admitted

but she didn't want to.

I shared how
happiness mayn't derived
when headhunted choice
variables fall into place;
metamorphosis occurs,
regardless of whether the
caterpillar is ready

she still withdrew from school

was she too weak
or was I too paternalistic?

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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-07-16 12:24 PM


Kaile,

Probably neither--many children are forced to leave school in order to work.

Bobby

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-07-16 04:20 PM


She will remember your words later ... I am sure.

Well done.

Love,
Margherita

XGarapanX
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3 posted 2008-07-16 04:36 PM


Great write, as usual, because you always present some kind of dilemma, or puzzle, or moral question and I like that. Keep teaching me, teacher!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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4 posted 2008-07-17 08:15 PM


Not paternalistic...just being a teacher who understands the value of an education. But there may be extenuating circumstances she isn't able to discuss...perhaps, she will return some day.
Prasad Nataraj
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5 posted 2008-07-18 06:09 AM


Wish I listen to my teacher too, they didn’t like me painting all those pictures in classroom.
Today I understand why my teachers said those words to me. May be she needs time to understand, hopefully before it’s too late? Nice write. Prasad

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