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You Wrote My Life
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You Wrote My Life |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA 
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As I read some new poems the other day, one caught me by surprise. It was where someone wrote my life, had they looked through my eyes. I wondered if this author, was someone that I knew. Because every single line, was so scary but true. It talked about love, and the pain I feel. They had to have known me, it was just too real. I sat and read it, over and again. I think I will stop, and create a new end. I stopped running away, and will stand fast in my tracks. I want the feel of real love, not merely a grasp. No longer will I leave little pieces, for ones who don't care. I will save it all my love, for that one that is rare. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
A pleasure to read this ms |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Thank you DS. I have dished out little pieces of my soul for far too long. Long enough that someone wrote a poem about it and it was scary that it fit my life to a T. Made me stop and think.... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i hope that this write is therapeutic |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'm proud of you Ladylisa. Your new outlook will bring you just what you wish for and when it does I would love to hear from you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"want the feel of real love, not merely a grasp." I think you have inspired a write out of me~~ love these lines and I too often think someone else has lived my life...  M |
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