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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-07-15 05:58 PM


Rarely
could I call that love,
but it did make me a mother;
and I can look and say it thus:
"Once upon a time we were,
one--if not the same."

I know it must be difficult.
It's not the same for you.
But even if we made not love,
you've become a "mother" too.

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1 posted 2008-07-15 06:07 PM



K~

Don't need anyone to tell me why I like this one !!!

(Mothers united !!)

And I SOOOOO like this one !!!

You are my kinda rascal, for sure !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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serenity blaze
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2 posted 2008-07-15 06:09 PM




*slaps five*

I loves ya, lady!


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3 posted 2008-07-15 06:56 PM


~grin
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4 posted 2008-07-15 08:09 PM


I'm still surprised,

lately,

at the brevity you've exhibited..

[ok, so I love your ramblings]

but my dear heart...you are

never

a "short" read!




serenity blaze
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5 posted 2008-07-15 09:11 PM


K&K?

Sometimes when I write, I just think "better OUT than in..."

this was one of those times.

Loved to you both!

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2008-07-16 02:46 AM


Clever, sarcastic and just plain funny.
                                 Ida

ladylisa
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7 posted 2008-07-16 07:09 AM


This gave me several feelings of connection.  Short but full of wisdom and emotion.  
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2008-07-16 11:22 AM


Certainly enjoyed this one, K

and love
M

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9 posted 2008-07-16 03:05 PM


Excellent write!

Eric

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2008-07-16 05:37 PM


thanks for reading and hmmm....

maybe I could make a compilation of The Menopause Diaries?

Mom's a little moody these days...


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11 posted 2008-07-17 12:23 PM


This seems like one of those moments within conversation, where you suddenly feel completely okay with saying, "Hey, I know much better, and this is why. Oh, and you'll know much better some day, too!"

I loved this. I can't wait until I can experience something like this.

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12 posted 2008-07-19 04:41 PM


Something about you (and your writing) that touches me deep inside.

Alison

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