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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-07-15 03:49 PM



Two names,
First the one you
Say aloud –
Answered in recognition of
Bone and flesh and the
Thoughts that hold my world
Together.
And than there is my
Name in stillness –
Awareness beyond
Reply…simply passing on
Your lips in a moment
Breathed against
Me.


© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2008-07-15 06:10 PM


EricC~
You still cause soft *sighs* of sweet content~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2008-07-15 06:12 PM


Beautiful sensations
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2008-07-15 06:51 PM


Beautiful...

You managed in a few words, a total comparison/contrast of knowing someone, and really knowing someone, as in the Biblical sense.

The second feels like "home", doesn't it?




XGarapanX
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4 posted 2008-07-15 07:44 PM


Woah, again!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Sunshine
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5 posted 2008-07-15 08:07 PM


Yes....

God

Bless




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6 posted 2008-07-16 09:34 AM


love how you say these!.....

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

ladylisa
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7 posted 2008-07-16 09:37 AM


Simply Beautiful!!!!!
Margherita
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8 posted 2008-07-16 04:48 PM


In stillness your name vibrates and resounds in sweet harmony into forever ...

Beautiful, dear Eric!

love
Margherita

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9 posted 2008-07-17 12:25 PM


Really enjoyed this one.
Honeybunch
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10 posted 2008-07-17 03:51 AM


I sometimes think that "Awareness beyond" is mere fantasy but maybe that's just a release mechanism.  Okay - that was just an aside.  Your words are as beautiful as ever!

Helen

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11 posted 2008-07-17 05:05 AM


really well written, I loved it
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12 posted 2008-07-17 09:50 AM


And then there is my
Name in stillness –


love your  thoughts today~~

M

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13 posted 2008-07-17 06:16 PM


whew

*sigh*

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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14 posted 2008-07-18 03:20 AM


oh my!!  just gorgeous!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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15 posted 2008-07-18 06:42 AM


this is really good. Thanks.

yann

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