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Lazy Days |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Lazy Days It's there amongst the soft clouds of the day, the swiftness of thoughts of when 'gainst the breezes you and I just were... No words need pass, for inside are the secrets of heart navigating the mind until touch is felt even when you are gone... Always room in the view of life for yesterdays' memories to linger on and kiss the lazy days of summer. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I don't have too many lazy days of summer. But, enjoy them when I do. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i liked the wistful feel of this |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An outstanding write, lady M. I'll be keeping this one. "for inside are the secrets of heart navigating the mind until touch is felt"  |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I enjoyed this piece. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... sometimes I blame thunderstorms on such thoughts--I guess it depends who you are remembering... I hope I didn't miss your b'day, btw? I get hopelessly lost every July...  Love you tho, and this reverie so filled with longing.  |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Loving, lovely, love. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Always room in the view of life for yesterdays' memories to linger on Oh what a perfect summer daze~ Love this poetic sway, Maur~ I remember that picture you posted way back when, of your wooden swing in the garden. That's where I picture you in this~ Warm hugs, Maureen~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Always room in the view of life for yesterdays' memories to linger on and kiss the lazy days of summer." Yes, it's like that for all of us in the lazy days no matter which season we choose for that. I have lazy winter days here because then the sun is just right to remember ... love.  Well said! Enjoyed! Helen |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yesterday's memories grow sweeter with time. A sweet piece. Joyce |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent writing, Maureen. Ida |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
such a nice piece to read this morning with my coffee. lis |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
 Sue, I make the time to laze around...and enjoy the fresh air and people watch as they pass by. kaile, thank you, that's how I feel when home and relazing~~wistful Midnitesun, thanks so much...I am trying to write from a more positive outlook. D.Lester Young, Thanks for visiting,nice to see you again. Karen, yes we have been having thunderstorms and heat waves and the only way to get through them is to sit and relax om the porch, as do all the neighbors( especially when you have such a nice porch  And my b'day, was at the end of June. Nothing special, just another day and year to hopefully look forward to and to try and forget this last one.Garapan, thank you for stopping by. Lori, you made me search for this picture and yes other than a change in cushions the swing is the same one. Very warm hugs back~~ Helen, glad to know you have those kinds of seasonal daze too Thank you.Joyce, it is amazing how you remember the good times over the bad and I am thankful for that. Ida, Thank you for stopping to read and respond. Your thoughts, as are all others, are very appreciated. lis, I like to read here during my morning coffee, too. Thank you. M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yea, that's the picture. Thank you Maureen, I was hoping you might post that here. Your house looks awesome!!! Love and hugs to you~ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Nakdthoughts, That looks like the view from the old Jordan place in Monticello, Georgia. Bobby |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful poem - sad, though - and beautiful picture, Maureen. - Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
powerful 'Romanticism' of loss... also, fine summertime nostalgia; etc. much applause for this fine 'penning'! |
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