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Open Poetry #43

Train of Magical Grace

jbal892
Member

since 2007-11-25

Posts 58

0 posted 2008-07-14 11:36 PM

Train of Magical Grace

What are you doing
So far away from home?
Hop on board this train,
Have a coke, sip the foam

Little girl, did you lose your way?
What would your mommy and daddy say?
No worries now, we’ll keep you safe
Stay on this train, for your sake

This train you’re on, you see
Is a magical ride like nothing before
We’ll take you home in a unique way
Just sit back, relax, enjoy your stay

Seats of chocolate leather,
Aisles of skittle gold
A pasture of horses in the back,
All your dreams we’re told

We’ve got movies, shows,
And presents with bows
Dolls with a house,
Ken, of course, is their spouse

This magical train ride,
You certainly won’t forget
Here take a picture,
It can be a local house monument

Choo-Choo! We’re home,
Your mommy and daddy now know you’re safe
I hope you enjoyed your ride
On the Train of Magical Grace

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-07-16 05:08 PM

How lovely and full of grace! Tender write.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-07-16 06:11 PM

Yo Jbal892,

The thought behind this poem is very fine.

The end rhymes work well.

Bobby

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2008-07-16 09:25 PM

I hope all of her rides are as safe and fun as this one. Joyce

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