navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Lady (Of My Soul)
Open Poetry #43
Post A Reply Post New Topic Lady (Of My Soul) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Inspired-8
Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2008-07-14 08:51 PM



Lady soft

Lady gentle

Writing off

Thoughts essential

Familiar patterns

Intricate way

Deepened terms

Your voice does say

All the echoes

Silent cares

Deep ofsoul

Release for share


--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
copyright2008 vduna

Inspired-8

© Copyright 2008 Victor Duna - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-16 05:05 PM


Very lovely, dear Victor!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-07-17 03:52 AM


Victor this really is beautiful! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2008-07-17 02:49 PM


Victor, a wonderful tribute to a woman who brings balm to your soul.  Beautiful poem.  

- Owl

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2008-07-17 06:29 PM


I love this!! nicely done!

Inspired-8
Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311
Pluto
5 posted 2008-07-17 07:26 PM


Much thanks for reading and commenting : )
hugs
vic

Inspired-8

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Lady (Of My Soul)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary