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vandana
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0 posted 2008-07-14 05:42 PM





Don't Say A Word

Don't say a word
About tomorrow
Tomorrow is yet so far
Why should we think about it.
Look around
There is no one
Around us
Put your arms around me
Look at my eyes
You will see love
in my eyes
What do you see ?
do you see love?
A love that cares
So now my love
time is here
just listen to me
What I am trying to say
This is right way
to say the words
to you
So don't say a word yet
unless you have to say
The night is young
and so are we
put your arms around me
Don't think about tomorrow
I can see sorrow
In your eyes
don't say a word

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-07-14 05:49 PM


Make him listen, yes, if he listens well he won't resist your love.

Lovely write.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2008-07-14 10:47 PM


Some would say living in the moment is not always in our best interest.
But it really is all there is, at the moment.  

I always enjoy your love poems, vandana~

XGarapanX
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3 posted 2008-07-14 10:57 PM


Dreamy write. Very in the moment.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2008-07-15 08:57 AM


"The night is young
and so are we
put your arms around me...
Don't think about tomorrow"


I felt your lovely words, vandana~~

M

kaile
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5 posted 2008-07-15 11:40 AM


soulful penning...
D.Lester Young
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6 posted 2008-07-15 02:19 PM


The love that turns a world around.
Ericc
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7 posted 2008-07-15 03:44 PM


Very beautiful!

Eric

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8 posted 2008-07-15 07:04 PM


ssssssssshhhhhhhhhhh

I won't say a word, but I shall type a few to convey just one:

"Enjoyed."

LindsayP
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9 posted 2008-07-16 12:03 PM



A very sweet write Vandana

enjoyed.

Lindsay

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