mosey in copper saliva - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-07-14 06:22 AM

lady moans of velvet copper
you surprised my caution
but you are worth the anger
when your suitor spits

there are memories behind
there at the corner skins
that were accidentally found
when we were just looking around

you had known other men
in the way you knew me
not as fast perhaps getting there
and not as slow leaving

but now I see myself in your eyes
and you fit my hands better
than water did when I was thirsty
then you turn your back to me

and just wait without leaving
_______________

daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-07-14 08:25 AM

quote:
but now I see myself in your eyes
and you fit my hands better
than water did when I was thirsty

I love to pick out the lines that from a poetic point of view are simply exceptional, but the whole write gives us an idea of your high class qualities.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2008-07-14 10:51 PM

there are memories behind
there at the corner skins
that were accidentally found
when we were just looking around

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yep, just looking and lurking!! lol~

You wrote some nice lines here, DS~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-07-15 06:10 AM

ms mar, thanks lady friend for looking in here..

________________

ms bluezy...before you accuse me of chasing another woman/women...it is just a bike I road...thanks babe

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

4 posted 2008-07-15 12:23 PM

quietly she sits
rincon salts and highway burns
polishing her skin.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-07-15 01:15 PM

Ms indi you should see the frothing tides there today, makes the copperhead shimmer. Thank you for the moments.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-07-15 08:57 PM

you always write so lovely Mr Daark... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-07-15 10:35 PM

ms r&b..thanks sweet lady from down under...

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.