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There is a hook.
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There is a hook. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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There is a hook in the water calling my name calling my skin If I touch it... No sparks to be had under the surface No thoughts to protect under the surface Just cold bodies trying to find our minds again trying the find our air again to connect and rejoin to remember If I touch it will the sharks come Or Will I be pulled to shore clean and wide-eyed once more. |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
absolutely beautiful. I can always count on you to bring such beauty to me  Keeping this. I do that often with your work. "How do the angels get to sleep, when the devil leaves the porchlight on?" -- Tom Waits, 'Mr. Siegal' |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very original rendering of a wished for process of "cleansing". Love, Margherita |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Incredible. This was a very original way to say what was said, and I hope you maintain that unique mindset and perspective. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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